Saturday, August 1, 2009

Poem

5 comments:

  1. Oh Beautiful Poem. The poem is absolutely fine, the only suggession i can give is that the nature of the words could b improved. I mean there are some words which can not be easily pronounced as "Pahari" word....like the word "taki" in the first line could be written as "tuki" and the word 'taray'in the second line could be written as 'tuwaray' and like that. But again to find out some improvement is easy but to write such a beautiful poem is Great. i really like it.

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  2. Thank you Tahair!
    You're help is much appreciated as this is meant to be a present to a wonderfull person...

    Best regards....

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  3. where did you get this poem from Realf?

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  4. I wrote this poem myself, why is realfEZ taking the credit????

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  5. Martin did write this poem...
    Well done!

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